我的英文简历，希望各位指点

jieqiong1215

Jieqiong Pang

No.99 POBox, Nanjing Agricultural University, Nanjing, 210095

+86(25)8439-1234

+86-1370-123-1234

pangjieqiong@yahoo.com.cn

Job Objective Humen Resources Management Post

Education

l Sep, 2005 – present, Nanjing Agricultural University

- Dept. of Tourism Management,

- Candidate for Bachelor in Administration degree, exppected June, 2009;

l Have a sound academic background, with overall GPA of 3.39, top 15% academic ranking;

l Major academic courses highlight:

- Management Principle, Human Resources Management, Management Psychology, Financial Affairs Management;

Experience & Activities

l Mar 2008 – present, Nanjing Agricultural University Young Volunteer Association

- Position held: Vice President

- Responsibility: Assist the President in engaging in various volunteer activities

- Activities: The recruitment of Nanjing Registered Volunteers

l Oct 2007 – present, Nanjing Agricultural Universty Student Union

- Position held: Executive Secretary-general

- Responsibility: Cope with day-to-day affairs of Student Union

Be in charge of the recruitment of New members

l Apr 2007 – Oct 2007, Nanjing Agricultural University Student Union

- Position held: Assistant of Chairman

- Responsibility: Assist the Chairman to complete day-to-day affairs

- Activities: Organizing The 1^st Nanjing Agricultural University Debate

Honers & Awards

l 2006-2007, Second-Class Scholarship for Excellent Students of Nanjing Agricultural University;

l 2006-2007, Excellent Volunteer of Nanjing Agricultural Universty;

l 2006-2007, Advanced Individual of Social Practice;

l 2006-2007, Excellent Leader of League;

l 2005-2006, First-Class Scholarship for Excellent Students of Nanjing Agricultural University.

Skills

l English: A good command of both spoken & written English; Passed CET-6.

l Computer: Frequent user of Microsoft Office software such as Word, Excel, Powerpoint.

梦想的玫瑰

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jieqiong1215

请大家给你建议~~~~~~~~

djconan1

没有intern?

case2007

A fair resume! but some points still have spaces for improvement. Firstly, too many words on "Position held" ;"Responsibility". Maybe you believe they are important, but who cares? Try aspects below, what achievement you have got, what you have learnt from these activities? If none, leave it blank, not instead of cheap words. Moreover,how can you prove your good command of English? CET6? no, or this resume? maybe, but you can ask someone else to help you with resume. Provide readers evidence! Regarding your passed CET6, too vague concept. Activities at school is of little value. Any social activities? People outside are not students, so do you(if you leave school). Why do you write the phone number like that? I know in USA, phone numbers(including mobile ones) are in a style of XXX-XXX-XXXX, but I never heard any chinese phone number containing a "-".

守夜灯

回复4楼 无名 ： 楼主的简历是仿照版上的成功应聘四大的简历模板写的，要是无名兄说得都对的话，那么是模板初了问题

case2007

Reply to 5: A resume, no matter how well it was prepared, cannot make sure of a successful interview and a nice position. A fine job cannot prove that corresponding resume is perfect, even a perfect resume in one field maybe unavailable in another situation. Especially for different applicants, not everyone can use the style above. If you graduate from top university(universities) in China, with top score record and excellent interview skills, and be able to communicate with foreigner coherently. Just write these words down, and you will be welcome to most companies. But if not, even if you copy that and create a similar resume, there will be useless. So, not all resume models are suitable for you, even if the models themselves are perfect!

sarayw

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metor1

谢谢楼主~~~~~

汐月

Reply to 5:
A resume, no matter how well it was prepared, cannot make sure of a successful interview and a nice position. A fine job cannot prove that corresponding resume is perfect, even a perfect  ...
case2007 发表于 2008-4-6 18:27

学习了～～～
正在准备英文简历，看来还是有很多要注意的啊～

独孤伟

领教了，学习

kalawenadam

拼错了Honers & Awards