我的英文自我介绍（希望各位达人们给点修改建议）

chuang_hueric

我的英文比较烂

感觉 自己写的 很散漫  没有中心  前后没有逻辑联系 没有上下文的呼应

希望大家给改改  提提建议  谢谢啦 

 

 

It is my great honor to have the opportunity for this interview, and I hope I can make a good performance today. Now I will introduce myself briefly.

 

My name is eric. 22 years old. And I was born and raised in Changsha, a city of glorious history.

I graduated from …. With the four years' study in finance, I acquainted myself with deep knowledge in this field. I have passion for what I have learned, because of which I have got good academic performances. In addition, I've also passed College Enlish Test band 6 in my undergraduate study and the microsoft word excel and power point are the basic skills during college.

 

Besides, I was also actively involved in student activities. I was a team member of the financial interest group in my college. There I learned a lot of commercial case that broaden my horizon in the economic field.

 

At the end of the undergraduate, I had a two month internship in Hunan Sun future company, which is the largest future company in the Hunan province.

 

I worked at the customer service center of the company’s headquarter and functioned as two roles. First I am in charge of the client's materials in headquarter and branch departments; Second, I supplied enquiry and account service to the clients and kept good cooperation work with other departments. From these daily affairs I learned a lot from the whole company's running and mastered numerous knowledge about futures, especially had a direct understanding toward the organization and the function of each department.

 

During my spare time, I like long-distance running & Mountain-climbing. These help me to have an invincible will and a spirit of enterprise by means of passing body's limits. Additionally, I do a lot of reading when I have time. Through reading a plenty of newspapers and books, I broaden my horizon in economic field, especially by studying The Economic Observer systematiclly, I grasp the knowledge of economy to a great extent.

 

As for my character, I would say, preciseness and carefulness in my character give me confidence in doing the basic work in your company, which are tedious, monotonous and high strength required in some people's eyes.

That’s all. Thank you for giving me the chance.

 

麻皮小蘑菇

这个是在面试的时候说吗?总体不错。 要记住那么长一段也不容易.

seaward2008

我看看~~~~

 

:96) 

caozenghou

总体不错。要记住那么长一段也不容易.

caozenghou

该作者 总体不错。

caidongshengcds

看看先。。。。。。。。。

haiyun

看看先。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

chuang_hueric

对 就是面试的时候说的啊 我感觉还短呢:110)

vampirexin

顶顶！！！

11_wing

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TiGer86120

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buyan141

看看内容，谢谢楼主分享

yuchengmutou

先看看，交流一下也好啊

ppo

kankan:) :)

佳期如梦

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lulu_5266

好东西 看看

yylover84

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李寻歡

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